IELTS Writing: How to Structure a Cause and Solution Essay to get 8

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In this video recorded by Ross IELTS Academy, we're going to check out a Task2 essay written by one of our candidates, and see why he got 7.5.

Before doing that, remember 4 important things when you practicing the IELTS writing:
1. Fully address all parts of the task, and present a fully developed position in answer to the question.
2. Support your ideas in a logical way. Don’t forget about paragraphing appropriately.
3. Try to use a wide range of vocabulary and not repeating some words over and over.
4. Most of your sentences should be error-free grammatically.
To get 7 and above you must avoid using simple structures.
Don’t worry, I will explain all these things in detail, later in other videos. Now let’s get started to check this writing together.

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